finished magazine analysis - front page

I feel the front page looked bare and unprofessional.
This could have been improved by adding more images.
It also could have advertisement, and more cover lines. As there are only two, it would not attract many readers.
By adding more cover lines, images and advertisment, my front page could have been made more successful.
I feel that it did not come out as well as it could have. I felt this page came out worst.